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English PT3 Part 1 – Postcards

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14 Thank You

Model Question

Read the following postcard from your neighbour, Daniel.

Dear Shafiq, Stamp
I am coming back from the village tomorrow. Would To:
you like some fresh fruits, traditional handicrafts or some
local snacks? Is there anything else that you want? Let Shafiq Farhain,
me know. I want to thank you for taking care of my cats Lot 80, Lorong Manggis,
while I was away. 66788 Ipoh,
Hope to hear from you soon. Perak.
Daniel
In about 80 words, write a postcard to Daniel to let him know what you want.

Model Answer

1 Dear Daniel, Stamp
2 It is my pleasure to take care of your cats. They are
so adorable and fun to play with.
3 Thank you for offering to bring me a gift from your
village. If it is not too much trouble, I would like to have To:
some fresh fruits. As you know, I love to eat local fruits Daniel Shah,
4
such as mangosteen and rambutan. I heard that your Kampung Delima,
village is famous for its big and sweet mangoes. Please Teluk Intan, 36000,
bring me some fresh fruits when you come back. I can Perak.
share them with my parents as they love to eat fruits
as well. 7
5 Well, take care and have a great time.
6 Daniel

1 Greet your friend 5 Provide a simple closing statement
2 Start by referring to the information 6 Sign your name
given in the question 7 Write your friend’s name and address
3 Suggest a souvenir REMEMBER!
4 Give good reasons to support your
recommendation A postcard is a short letter, so the rules for writing
letters also apply here.

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