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Narrative Writing

    Elaboration Use details when you write a true
story about something that happened. Details help
your reader picture what you are telling about.

   Megan drafted some sentences for a true story. See
how she revised her writing to add details.

   Writing Checklist                      Revised Draft

         Organization                                           b eauti ful
         Did I tell about          My friend Lucy gave me a
         events in an order      with many colorful beads
         that makes sense?      bracelet. She made it. She
         Development            calls it a friendship bracelet.
         Does my writing        When I wear it I think of my
         sound like the way I   best friend Lucy.
         would tell the story?  I love my bracelet!
        Elaboration
         Did I use details
         to tell the reader
         more?

         Conventions
         Did I use complete
         sentences?

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