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Narrative Writing

       Development When you write a friendly letter,
    the voice of your letter shows what you are like.

       Nestor drafted a letter to his uncle. Then he added
    words to make the letter sound more like the way he
    would talk to his uncle.

    Writing Checklist                     Revised Draft

    Organization            Dear Uncle Julio,
    Did I use the five         We had fun at Grandma
    parts of a friendly
    letter? Did I tell      Rita’s last Sunday. We played
    things in order?
                          my favorite
    Development
     Does the letter        games. Auntie Selena sang.
     sound like me?         Hector played his guitar.

    Elaboration                     those songs that you and
    Did I use words that            I used to sing together
    tell how I fell?

    Conventions
    Did I capitalize
    and punctuate the
    date, greeting, and
    closing correctly?

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