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artistic composition and sentences enhance the rythmic flow according to picture. whole story while watching the picture and matching the verses with picture.
Image helps in creating the exotics in the poem. copyright@Saraswati Poswal

We can use the metaphors which simply elucidate by proclaiming without comparison. This can only happen in poems in literature. Bio– Saraswati Poswal has a penchant for writing poems. She loves writing in prompt and different segments. She writes poems in English, Hindi and Punjabi. One of her
And use of simile indicates the comparison with words: like and as. Punjabi Poem is published in Amarawati Poetic Prisma in 2016. This book has received Limca Award. Her poem story of the liberal Women was selected among the top
three in Pranasso International Italy. Many of her articles on Peace, family and Women are being published in many Anthologies. Many of her poems are being Published
The words used for a poem should be concrete which only carry the sensual feeling of the poet which he or she can feel with senses and script not the abstract words with
in many Anthologies. She ia author at her Book Musing Showers Which was released at Kalinga Festival In Bhubneshwar by Anand Neelkantan who is writer of rise of
the intellectual mind displayed.
Shivgamini. She is is working for many anthologies as an editor she is working for many which are going to published within few Days. She was the first to make her video
People who communicate their theme easily with the society, are more convincing and comfortable in putting their thoughts in front of people.
of her own reciting her poem and sending it to Italy. Was appreciated very much. Her poem recitation was awarded at Mathura Conference. She has won many prizes and
It's in the hand of poet to subvert the ordinary places and situations to shape them with new origin of lively words. working with many groups of poetry. Most admired person and famous for smile.
Now, it depends upon the genre of the poem by poet how easily he/ she continuously spell bounds the reader with created script.

WHAT DIFFICULTIES A WRITER FINDS IN WRITING A GOOD PICTORIAL POETRY?
Plato's Theory
Poet's express sentiments and disparage other people with those sentiments.
In Plato's theory art is a copy of a thing which is a copy of the Idea and artistic reproduction will
We can find more easy poems in this today's world. Which for sure readable carrying message for upcoming generations. It is Contemporary, folk, genial and simple.
make the beauty of the thing gross by being twice removed from reality. Because only the Idea is
But the main motive of writing good pictorial poetry is to read more rather than writing more. And, just go through picture by looking at every aspect it might depict. the real thilng. In Realism art immitates the thing which itself is a copy and thus such art cannot be
Writing should encourage composition of a good write. "pure" but the proponents of realism beleive that a realistic, not realized, representation of things
produces the same pleasurable sensation as the Real thing. Here we are not talking about realism
Consult and read more dictionary and synonyms of words as much as you can use them in your day to day life. To use them at the required and essential times.
which includes all real things because all real things in life do not give us the same pleasurable
We need to use our conscience and sub-consciousness to be used for writing good poetry and sometimes, it becomes magical in words.When words utilised by the poet sensations. For example, a plain white wall does not evoke a visual beauty but colorit, set it as part
are in a proper state, they can create a remarkable poem. But sometimes, when we divert and actually just keep eyes on words instead of the flaws, we tend to produce an of the room and furniture, view it in the morning's sunlight or the afernoon shadows and it gets
unpleasant poem which will be adored less and criticised the most. transformed into a thing of beauty and a realist painter will paint such a scene that will give the

WHAT DIFFICULTIES WE GET IN WRITING GOOD PICTORIAL POETRY? same visual pleasure that the orignal scene gives.
Of course the question aries if the painter paints merely the drab white wall, will it give an
The problem the poet gets in delivering good poem is the streaming the flow of feelings and using various tools and techniques to maintain that flow.
aesthitic experience? Of course not. So given in Realism there is an element of choosing, the way
Words truly carry a magic in them. Poet only has to read good poems and write less to keep the charm and grace of words. The more the poet burns to learn and the more
things combine to produce a pleasant sensory experience. If that were so, we would not be
masterpieces he/she will compose.
justified in saying that there is no element of subjectivity in the realistic art. Subjectivity is defintitly
Poor grammar, incomplete sentences, straight-forwardness and the way a writer pretentious with their writing. there, in the way the mind looks at the combination of things or in the viewer perspective. There is a
Moreover, the sentimental writes distract from the literary methods. Of course, there is no special method for writing a poem. You don't have to be genius. But, control and way to look at things, the way light falls on them, the way they combine with other objects to make
command over words is necessary, which a reader can catch with the display of verses. for beauty and a realist painter captures beauty this way. Essentially all things have light in them,
the way they speak to each other and they join the stream of life. The way they share space with
Straightforwardness becomes a hurdle and hinderance while composing a good poem. And, the honest expression sometimes, hide the good poem as well.
other things in the room, in the garden, in the take, in the sky. Theartist vision captures the light
We need to avoid this practice. New upcoming poets sometimes, without knowing compose a poem without consulting the dictionary. inherent in the things and captures the very essence of things, the nature of their being.
Ofcourse for a good Pictorial Poetry you need to have the knowledge of using a dictionary. But sometimes, use those words which your heart speaks. It should depict the

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