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 MY JOURNEY IN

 AN ELEVATOR


                                          Next, the elevator continued rising
                                        up until it reached the top floor, the
   : PEENAPRAPA TANGPRADUBKIAT     : WONGTAWAN  WONGSANGANAN  twenty-fourth. A group of African males
                                        came in. They were giant, dark and
 How  often  do  you  stand  in  an         receptionist sought an available room   scary. They  chatted,  shouted,  and
 elevator  and  wonder  what  to  do         on the upper floor for us. We carried our   laughed noisily. I pretended to ignore
 when it gets stuck? I experienced this   luggage and walked toward an elevator.   them. I touched the button for floor
 situation when I was twelve years old.   I was the first one who stepped into the   number fourteen. When the elevator
 It was about two years ago. I was   elevator and my parents were behind   door opened, I saw my mom waiting for
 spending my holidays in Spain with my   me. I had no idea that the elevator   me. I threw myself to her and kept
 parents. As we visited many cities and   would abruptly close so swiftly that I   crying. At that time, my dad was still
 towns, we had to change our stay with   had no time to press the ‘open’ button.   looking for me on other floors.
 several hotels. One night, after we had   The door closed and the elevator   elevator. The only feeling at that time   It seemed to be a very long journey
 traveled all day long, we checked-in to   started moving up. I was alone and, of   was I wanted to cry. Trying to be conscious,   in the elevator. Though it was actually
 a stylish high-rise hotel in Barcelona.   course, panicked. I reached out and   I was looking for an emergency button.   about five minutes, it felt like five hours.
 The hotel was a cylindrical tower with   picked the floor number button, but the   Unfortunately, everything was written   Since then, whenever I step into an
 a stunning look. Everything seemed to   elevator kept moving up beyond the   in Spanish. So, I thought out another   elevator, I hasten to reach the ‘open’
 be perfect except the elevator!  floor number I had selected.  way of using my cell phone to call my   button at all times. This mishap taught
 While we were getting into a hotel   After being in the elevator for a   parents. I reached into my shoulder bag   me to have consciousness in facing
 room, we noticed that the room was   while,  I  felt  the  elevator  shaking   and immediately noticed that I had left   with any unexpected incidents.
 filled with the smell of cigarette smoke.   slightly. A few minutes later, it stopped   it with my mom. I started crying with
 Since my mom is allergic to the smoke,   going up. It didn’t go down, left or right;   fear, but luckily, a few minutes later,
 we phoned a receptionist and asked       the elevator just stopped its motion. I   the trouble maker elevator resumed
 if  we  could  change  the  room. The        then realized that I was locked in the   working normally again.
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