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English SPM Part 1 – Short Communicative Message
You could do voluntary work with the Dignity for Children Foundation which helps to
empower underprivileged children transform their lives positively. They learn physical skills
and social responsibility through projects like helping in urban gardening. They attend tuition
classes. Kill two birds with one stone – help them in the gardening and give them tuition!
That’s food for thought, isn’t it? Get back to me.

Penerbitan Pelangi Sdn Bhd. All Rights Reserved.
Sharon

WORD Bank IDIOMS
option – choice put to good use – use something in a worthwhile manner
empower – enable
kill two birds with one stone – to achieve two aims at once
food for thought – something that warrants serious consideration

INFO CORNER
Dignity for Children Foundation is a non-governmental organization that provides holistic care and
education for urban poor children in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia. “Breaking the Cycle of Poverty through
Quality Education.”

Model
6 Consolation and Advice

You received a letter from your brother, Rafie, who participated in an essay writing
competition.

Hi Sis,
I’m so sorry to disturb you as you are in the midst of preparing for your finals. I’m feeling
depressed as my entry in the Daily Mirror essay competition was not chosen at all. I
did my best but obviously my efforts were not sufficient to merit a placing in the top
ten entries. I’ve always been told that my essays are excellent but unfortunately not
good enough for pitting against others.
I need your consolation and encouragement.
Rafie

Now write an email to your brother in about 80 words. Write your answer below.

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