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              Style 2 is similar to Style 1, but in this case perhaps you are talking about more than

            one paper by Blinco, so the paper is the most logical first element in the sentence.
              In Style 3, what Blinco found is more important than the fact that Blinco found it.
            This is a very typical style, but inevitably involves using the passive, which then
            leads to longer and heavier sentences.

              In Style 4 Blinco is not mentioned at all, but only a reference to his paper in
            parentheses.

             The style you use will depend on your journal’s “Style Rules”, but is likely to con-

            tain an element of flexibility. In fact, Chris Rozek’s Introduction in Sect.   15.4  uses
            two styles:

                Heine et al. (2001) furthered this idea by testing …
               … can be correlated with final grades in college-level classes (Blankstein & Winkworth, 2004)

              He does this to:

              •   Change the focus from author to fi ndings


              •    Create variety for the reader






            15.6   How can I talk about the limitations of previous work

                  and the novelty of my work in a constructive
                  and diplomatic way?
              Sometimes in the Literature Review you want your readers to note the strong fea-
            tures of your work and the limitations of previous works by other authors. If what
            you propose has never been done before, you can begin your sentence as indicated
            by the words in italics below.

                 As far as   we know , there are no studies on …

                 To  [ the best of ]  our knowledge , the literature has not discussed …

                 We believe that this is the fi rst time  that principal agent theory has been applied to …
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