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English SPM Part 1 – Short Communicative Message
Model Answer

To : pohalbf@gmail.com
Subject : Application for the Post of Salesperson
Penerbitan Pelangi Sdn Bhd. All Rights Reserved.

Dear Sir / Madam,
Your advertisement New Star is referred. I am interested in working as a salesperson in
your company.
I have completed my SPM and am waiting for the results. I am sure that I will be able to
do the work as a salesperson as I am mature and friendly. As the job involves working at a mall,
it will suit me fine.

I am able to converse in the three major languages and two dialects. So, I should not
have problem with the sales work. I look forward to an interview at any time convenient to you.

Yours sincerely,
Cecilia Liu

WORD Bank

mature – fully developed and grown physically and mentally
dialects – a particular form of a language which is peculiar to a specific region or social group.

INFO CORNER

Remember etiquette when emailing with admissions counsellors, scholarship sponsors and financial
aid officers. Use formal language and a professional format. Don’t use a “cute” email address for
important emails. Use business-like address. Make your email clear. A clear and concise format.

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