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English SPM Part 3 – Story
Model
103 Nature’s Fury

Write your answer in 200 – 250 words in an appropriate style.
Your teacher asked you to write a story for your form newsletter. The story must have
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the title:
Nature’s Fury.
Your story should include:
• a description of Nature’s Fury
• the catastrophes : the action and solutions
Write your story.

• Setting / Plot
• Survival course – a
• Cold gloomy night seaside resort
• Wind, thunder, lightning • Tree struck lightning, No lives lost
• Waves trapped teenager -
rescue
• Missing child

Model Answer

Nature’s Fury
It was a cold, gloomy night with the howling wind,
Introduction
• The weather the rumbling thunder, the flashes of lightning and the
incessant pounding of the waves.
Ten of us were at a survival course holed up at
Body
• Setting an isolated seaside resort. We were all set for our next
• Plot activity: A Treasure Hunt but the inclement weather paid
woe to our plan.
Incident 1 Suddenly, a commotion came from the kitchen,
• Lightning followed by cries of help. The distraught-looking chef
• Tree came running into the lounge. It seemed lightning had
• Kitchen
• Trapped Victim struck a tree causing it to collapse through the kitchen
• Rescue roof and landing on his son. The unfortunate son was

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