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English PT3 Part 1 – Messages/ Notes
Model
7 Message – Spend Time Together

Model Question

Read the following message from your friend, Suzy.

Lily,

I will come over at 11 a.m. tomorrow. Should we play board games, read
magazines or make some desserts? Or do you have something else in mind?
Let me know what you think so I can bring the things we need.

Suzy

In about 80 words, write a message to Suzy to tell her your choice.

Model Answer

Suzy,

Why don’t you come over at 10 a.m. instead? That way we can spend more
time together. I think we should make some desserts.

I recently found a new recipe for chocolate cupcakes. It is made from
dark chocolate instead of milk chocolate. I think it will be really delicious. We
can decorate the cupcakes with some sprinkles and give it to our parents as a
surprise. Don’t forget to bring your apron when you come over. I am sure our
dessert will be delicious!

Lily

USEFUL TIP
At the end of your answer, you can restate your choice
to give it more emphasis.

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