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English PT3 Part 1 – Messages/ Notes

Model
5 Note – Stay Safe

Model Question

Read the following note from your mother.

Lucas,

I hope your first day back in school after the Movement Control Order
(MCO) went well. Don’t forget to sanitise your school bag once you are home.
There is a sanitising spray and sanitising wipes in the cupboard next to the
door. Please let me know which type of sanitiser you prefer as I will be to the
supermarket after work.

Mom

In about 80 words, write a note to your mother to tell her your choice.

Model Answer

Mom,
I think I prefer to use a sanitising spray to sanitise my school bag and shoes
after school.
As my school bag is quite bulky, it is easier to use a spray. It is also more
economical since a single bottle of spray can last for a few weeks. On the
other hand, sanitising wipes have to be replaced regularly and they create a
lot of rubbish since we have to throw them away afterwards. Please buy more
sanitising sprays when you go to the supermarket later. I also need a bottle of
hand sanitiser to bring to school.
Lucas

USEFUL TIP
You can add extra examples of your own as long as they are related to the main
topic to make your answer more interesting.

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