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English PT3 Part 1 – Emails

Model
4 I am Coming Home

Model Question

Read the following email from your brother, Ashrul.

To: ashraf@email.com
From: ashrul@email.com
Subject: I am coming home this weekend.

Hi Ashraf,
I am coming home from the university this weekend. But I don’t know if I
should take the bus, the train or take a flight back. What do you think?
Your brother,
Ashrul

In about 80 words, write an email to Ashrul to give him some advice.

Model Answer

To ashrul@email.com

From ashraf@email.com
Subject Trains are the best!
Hi Ashrul,
I am glad you are coming home. Let’s catch a movie together when you are
back. I think you should take the train.
The train is fast and comfortable. It will save you a lot of time as it only takes
2 hours to reach our town from your university. It is also much cheaper compared
to taking the plane. The train station is only a stone’s throw from our house so we
can meet you there when you arrive.
Your brother,
Ashraf

REMEMBER!
Arrange your points carefully. You can offer a suggestion in the first paragraph
and provide the justification for your choice in the second paragraph.

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