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English PT3 Part 2 – Theme: Environment
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                  •  Journey towards Putrajaya – approximately one hour – arrive at Putrajaya at 10.00
                    a.m.
                  •  Visit Agriculture Heritage Park – plants that have contributed to the Malaysian economy
                    – rubber, cocoa and oil palm
                  •  Visit Putrajaya Botanical Garden – canopy bridge and Sun Garden
                  •  12 noon – lunch – Medan Selera Seri Teja
                  •  1.30 p.m. – Putrajaya Mosque – drive through Putrajaya – PM’s Department and other
                    administrative buildings
                  •  3.00 p.m. – jetty – river cruise
                  •  4.00 p.m. –  Alamanda Shopping Centre
                  •  6.00 p.m. – board bus – back to school

                  Conclusion
                  •  Arrive back in school by 7.00 p.m.

                  Model Answer

                      On the day of the outing, we will assemble in school by 8.00 a.m. Our teachers
                  will take our attendance and we will board the bus at 8.30 a.m. The bus will leave
                  the school compound at 9.00 a.m. sharp. We will then proceed the journey towards
                  Putrajaya, which will take approximately an hour.

                      Our first stop will be the Agriculture Heritage Park which showcases the plants
                  that have contributed to the Malaysian economy such as rubber, cocoa and oil palm.
                  Next, we will visit the Putrajaya Botanical Garden where we will walk along the canopy
                  bridge and visit the Sun Garden.
                      At noon we will have lunch at Medan Selera Seri Teja. At 1.30 p.m. we will
                  make our way to the Putrajaya Mosque. Next, we will drive past the Prime Minister’s
                  Department as well as the other administrative buildings in Putrajaya. At 3.00 p.m.
                  we will make our way to the jetty where we will board the boat for a river cruise. The
                  trip is expected to last an hour.
                      At 4.00 p.m. we will travel to Alamanda Shopping Centre where we will spend
                  two hours shopping. At 6.00 p.m. we will board the bus and head back to the school.
                  We should arrive at the school by 7.00 p.m.


                  WORDBank

                   sharp     –  exactly
                   canopy    –  the branches and leaves that spread out at the top of a group of trees forming a
                               type of roof




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