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English PT3 Part 2 – Theme: Environment

WORDBank

excursion – a short journey or trip
gear – the equipment or clothing needed for a particular activity
locate – to find the exact position of something
jetty – a platform for boats to pick up and drop off passengers

Model
121 Newspaper Report on Bee Attack

Model Question Report

You are a journalist working for a local daily. In about 120 words, write a newspaper
report based on the following notes you made about a bee attack. You may use the
notes below to help you.

Victim in lorry with grandson – suddenly swarm of bees entered lorry – both
alighted – grandfather pushed grandson back into lorry – wound up windows –
grandson powerless to help – nearby residents heard shouts – man removed shirt
– set it on fire – bees flew away – victims rushed to hospital – died from allergic
reaction to bee venom

Write your report.

Introduction
• Sixty-year-old man died protecting grandson from swarm of bees

Body
• Victim in lorry with grandson
• Suddenly swarm of bees entered lorry
• Stopped lorry – both alighted
• Grandfather pushed grandson back into lorry – wound up windows
• Grandson powerless to help grandfather
• Nearby residents heard shouts – man removed shirt – set it on fire – bees flew away
• Victims rushed to hospital – dead on arrival – died from allergic reaction to bee venom

Conclusion
• Grandson – very sad – never forget grandfather’s sacrifice

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