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English PT3 Part 1 – Emails

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1 Online Classes

Model Question

Read the following email from your cousin, Samantha.

To: samuel@email.com
From: samantha@email.com
Subject: Lack of Motivation during Online Classes
Hi Samuel,
As you know, I have been having online classes at home since the Movement
Control Order (MCO) started. Lately, I am feeling very demotivated to study but
I don’t know how to overcome this problem. Should I talk to my parents, ask for
help from my teachers or just keep my feelings to myself? Do you have any other
suggestions for me?
Regards,
Samantha

In about 80 words, write an email to Samantha to give her some advice.

Model Answer

To: samantha@email.com
From: samuel@email.com
Subject: Do not bottle up your feelings!
Hi Samantha,
First of all, I want you to know that it is completely normal to feel demotivated.
However, you should try to talk to your parents about your feelings.
It is important for us to share our feelings with other people so that they can
help us find a solution to our problem. If you find it hard to talk about your feelings,
you can write down the things that you want to say on a piece of paper. The most
important thing is not to keep your feelings bottled up. I hope you will enjoy your
online classes.
Regards,
Samuel USEFUL TIP
When you offer a suggestion, you can give some
ideas on how your suggestion can be carried out.

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