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English PT3 Part 1 – Emails

Model
2 Family Outing

Model Question

Read the following email from your cousin, Mei Ling.

To: junhong@email.com
From: meiling@email.com
Subject: Family Outing
Hi Jun Hong,
My family and I would like to go for an outing this weekend. Where should we
go? Should we go to the zoo, the beach or the Science Centre? Do you know any
other place that is suitable for families to spend time?
Regards,
Mei Ling

In about 80 words, write an email to Mei Ling to give her some advice.

Model Answer

To: meiling@email.com
From: junhong@email.com
Subject: Family Outing
Hi Mei Ling,
A family outing during the weekend is a great idea! I wish to go on a trip too.
I think you and your family should go to the beach.
At the beach, there are many activities that you can do. You can go swimming
with your siblings. You can also build sandcastles or collect seashells. Once you are
tired from all the excitement, you can have a relaxing picnic with your family. I think
you and your family will have a blast at the beach!
Regards,
Jun Hong

USEFUL TIP
The subject of an email should briefly summarise what the email is mainly about.

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