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English PT3 Part 2 – Theme: Environment

                    Based on a tip-off from a resident, a team from the Daily News visited the site in
               Selayang. We saw many logging tracks on the hill near Empangan Batu in Ulu Yam,
               which can only be seen from the top of a hill in Taman Selayang Mulia.
                    According to a resident, illegal loggers seem very adept at dodging law enforcers
               and they move to another site when one is raided. For example, lorries carrying timber
               from an illegal logging area in Selayang Utara are sneaking out at night through the
               residential areas to evade the authorities.
                    Another resident, who lives near the site, said he used to see huge 16-wheeler
               lorries laden with timber emerging from the jungle at night opposite his house.
               However, he said that now all is quiet. He suspects that the lorries are using a different
               route and, as evidence, he pointed to the logging track visible on the hill.
                    The residents hope the Selangor Forestry Department and the Selayang Municipal
               Council will put an immediate stop to the illegal logging activities in the area.
               WORDBank

                 crackdowns  –  actions taken against an undesirable or illegal activity
                 rampant     –  happening frequently
                 adept       –  highly skilled
                 dodging     –  avoiding somebody or something, especially in a dishonest way




                  Model
                            120        Report on Excursion for School Newsletter



               Model Question                                                         Report

               The members of the Recreation Club of your school recently went on a three-day
               excursion. In about 120 words, write a report on the trip for the school newsletter.
               You may use the notes below to help you.


                 Include the following details in your report:
                 •  24 members participated
                 •  Packed camping gear, food, first-aid kit, water
                 •  8.00 a.m. bus to Lumut, ferry to island
                 •  Arrived 3.00 p.m., set up camp, swimming, built a campfire
                 •  Next day – jungle trekking, picnic, swimming and beach volleyball
                 •  Third day – packed – cleaned up campsite – headed home


               Write your report.


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