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English PT3 Part 2 – Theme: Environment
Conclusion
• Based on feedback – majority decision – likely to plan trip to island resort

Model Answer

A survey was carried out among the Form Three students of SMK Tanjung Bidara
to find out where the students would like to go for an excursion after the year-end
examination.

The pie chart shows that 48% of the students suggested a trip to an island resort.
These students enjoy swimming in the sea and taking part in aquatic activities such
as snorkelling and fishing. Among the places suggested were Pulau Tioman, Pulau
Pangkor and Pulau Langkawi.
25% of the students would like a stay at a hill resort to enjoy the cool weather and
beautiful scenery. They also expressed interest in attractions such as flower nurseries,
strawberry farms and tea plantations at a wonderful hill resort like Cameron Highlands.
Genting Highlands and Fraser’s Hill were also on their list.
22% of students expressed a preference for a visit to a national park. These
students are always over the moon about activities such as camping and jungle trekking.
Many of those who opted for such a destination were also nature and animal lovers.
Taman Negara, Endau-Rompin National Park and Bako National Park were their
favourite choices.

The remaining 5% of the students suggested visiting a neighbouring country
such as Thailand and Singapore. To their disappointment, not many students were in
favour of this suggestion due to the cost involved as well as the distance from home.
Furthermore, most of the students would incur the additional cost of applying for
international passports.

Based on the feedback from the students, the school would most probably go
along with the majority and organise a trip to an island resort.

WORDBank
aquatic – connected with water
opted – make a choice from a range of posibilities
incur – to experience something as a result of actions you have taken
feedback – advice, criticism or information about how good or useful something or
somebody’s work is

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