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English PT3 Part 2 – Theme: Environment

Model Suggestions for Improvement in
127 Neighbourhood

Model Question Charts and Graphs

A survey was recently carried out by the residents of Taman Amansuria to find out
the areas that require improvement within the neighbourhood. In about 120 words,
write a report. You may use the information below to help you.

Suggestions for Improvement in Taman Amansuria

45

40

35

Number of Residents (%) 25
30

20

15

10

5

0
Security Greenery and Waste More Street Other
Public Parks Disposal Lights Issues
System
Areas That Require Improvement
Write your report.

Introduction
• Survey – residents of Taman Amansuria – improvements needed in neighbourhood
Body
• 42% – main concern – security – break-ins and petty thefts – construction workers –
suggestions – voluntary patrol or employ guards

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