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English PT3 Part 2 – Theme: Environment
cordoned off prime portions of the beach for their illegal activities, thus preventing
the public from access to these areas.
The activities, namely jet-skiing, beach buggy rides and horse-riding were
dangerous, annoying and noisy. The beach buggies were racing up and down the
beach preventing anyone from relaxing. The horse-riding operators did not bother to
clean up the excrement left behind by the horses. We also witnessed inexperienced
jet-skiers coming dangerously close to swimmers.

My family and I decided to cut short our day trip and we left the beach in the
early afternoon. Needless to say, we will not be returning to that particular beach
unless the authorities restore the peace to the area.

WORDBank

aggressive – behaving in a determined and forceful way in order to succeed
prime – most important
buggy – a small car, often without a roof and doors
excrement – waste material discharged from humans or animals

Model
129 An Expedition to Taman Negara

Model Question
Descriptive/Narrative
You recently went on an expedition to Taman Negara with the prefects. In about
120 words, write an essay describing your activities during the trip. You may use
the notes below to help you.

• Jungle cruise – Tembeling Jetty to park headquarters at Kuala Tahan – 2½ hours
• Reached campsite – put up tents – realised – challenging trip – survive on limited
food and water – endure weather conditions – determined to make the most of
the trip – no one complained
• Activities:
– Jungle trekking expedition – lookout point – Gunung Tahan – spectacular
view
– Canopy walkway – longest in world
– Scenic boat ride to Lata Berkoh – cascading waterfalls
– Visited settlement – indigenous people – the Batek – Kampung Yong

Write your essay.

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