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English PT3 Part 2 – Theme: Environment
We also visited a settlement of one of Malaysia’s indigenous people, the Batek.
The settlement we visited was Kampung Yong, where we got to see how forest dwellers
live and work.

On the whole it was indeed an adventure for all of us. Not surprisingly, many of us
expressed the desire to return to Taman Negara and explore the rest of the beautiful
park.

WORDBank

cruise – a journey on a ship for pleasure
murky – dirty and difficult to see through
canopy – a layer of something that spreads over an area like a roof
cascading – falling downwards in large amounts
settlement – a place where people come to live and set up their homes

Model
130 A Holiday in Cameron Highlands

Model Question Descriptive/Narrative

In about 120 words, describe a holiday that turned out to be more enjoyable than
you expected. You may use the notes given to write your essay.

• State why you were initially unenthusiastic about your holiday – change of
destination
• Describe your holiday – Where you stayed
– The places you visited
– How you spent your time
• Describe your feelings when your holiday ended

Write your essay.

Introduction
• Usual holiday – beach resort – look forward to trips

Body
• This year – father suggested highland resort
• Initially disappointed – father adamant – packed bags – Cameron Highlands
• Bungalow – spacious, well-equipped, fireplace – own rooms

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